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Lily's Light

February 11th 2008 04:14
Lily's Light


‘Lily’s Light’


ushered to my computer seat
I’m sitting in the dark
surrounded by posts and comment
and bloggers’ pleas to hark

Lily shone a light on me
I caught a glimpse of your reflection
warmed by your fuzzy focussed light
so thanks for the attention


for feedback is incredible
when you’re sitting in the light
that people can see and hear you
and want to read your write

I like to pour myself in here
it’s much bigger than a cup
sweeter than a spoonful of sugar
and nothing to do with luck

for writing is a passionate thing
so personal and protected
to get undressed and bare one’s soul
is much harder than I expected

poetry is all around me now
words marry and get divorced
I feel like a marriage counsellor
with poetic license of course

if you’re not Lily and reading this
and this poem’s not for you
then go and praise someone else
it’s the best thing you could do



Dances
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Comment by Lily

February 11th 2008 04:38
aww you sweet heart you.. thank you so much!!!!!! btw i love it that you sign off 'Dances' .. that's a great pen name..

it is harder than expected, isn't it...

~Lily

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