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February 9th 2008 12:41


‘Blue’

a cold colour dying without oxygen
the steak’s underdone
dragged by horns over flame’s namesake
a fool’s sky; translucent
merely reflecting the ocean
dying
underdone
and cheated

Blue



Dances

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Comment by Lily

February 10th 2008 10:53


Ars Poetica
reminds me of flames that turn blue when they lack oxygen too, great poem Dances. Keep writing, i'm reading.

~Lily

Comment by Danceswithwords

February 11th 2008 04:18


Poetic Sedition
Inspiration
Thanks Lily!

A poem for you and your feed back


Dances

Comment by Lily

February 11th 2008 04:48


Ars Poetica
in appreciation....

Blue Gladioli


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