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Poetic Sedition - August 2008

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August 26th 2008 01:41

Two Doves sitting on the fence
Facing opposite directions
In love, or maybe not
They discuss it

One flies away
The other doesn’t bother to look behind
Nor wonder where he went
Or what might have been

Love is fickle
The fence is solid
Life is warm in the sun and the view of the lawn

Knowing exactly what to do

Flying around is a waste of time
Trying to find a mate
Own the fence and the situation
Beautiful things come to those who wait

Like the neighbour's cat…

Dances

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Comment by Dianna G

August 26th 2008 02:42

I Wish This Was 42
Fictional Worlds

Nice.

<3 poetry.

Comment by Danceswithwords

August 26th 2008 04:52

Poetic Sedition
Inspiration

Hey Dianna G,

Thanks. I'm pondering about this symbol. <3 and what it all could mean...

It could be a love heart on its side... (aww thanks.)

It could be a very soft cock - in which case I a) rarely write with a hard-on & b) maybe you think all poetry is soft cock...

OR

It could be that you scored my poem mathematically less than three. Hmmm. What's it out of?

AND "Nice." Its the precursor, sometimes, for the most cynical of remarks.

OR

You could be paying me a compliment, in which case, thanks and giggle about the nonsense and my warped understanding of internet speak and its many symbols.

Dances

Comment by Dianna G

August 26th 2008 05:02

I Wish This Was 42
Fictional Worlds

Ha.

It was NOT a soft cock. It was a heart.

And also a compliment.
~Dianna

Comment by Danceswithwords

August 26th 2008 09:22

Poetic Sedition
Inspiration

Boy do I feel silly...

Thanks for the HEART ;o)

Dances

Comment by Dianna G

August 26th 2008 09:24

I Wish This Was 42
Fictional Worlds

It's okay.

Silliness is good.
~Dianna

Comment by Lily

September 25th 2008 07:35

Ars Poetica

bwahahaha that was a pisser.. pisser means UM i dunno, something that makes u pee ur pants? lol sorry but your comment CRACKED ME UP..

i agree with you flying around looking for mate is a waste of time... grow to love your fence

~lily

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